Will Anyone Review My Story?

So, I just got the first episode done for my comedy story called Reality. I would like to know if anyone would check it out and let me know how I did before I move onto the next episode.

Thank you in advance.

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Oof. I’D love too.

Thank you! Just let me know what you think of it afterwards, I’d appreciate it!

Oh my god, he ran naked in the hall. And that sock doe. :joy::joy::joy::joy::joy:. Please do another one I need more!!

Haha. I’m working hard on this story, if you want to read the second episode I’ll let you know when I finish it if you would like to read it.

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I wish this was published.

Cause I want o add it too…

Favorites.

Cause you a queen at comedy.

Haha thanks, hopefully it will be published soon!

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Hell yeah!

Bump. Because I need more opinions.

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