Will read the first episode of your stories! (Just read topic please.) [CLOSED TO CATCH UP]

Hello, beloved Episode writers!

Here's the topic, but we're CLOSED right now. I'm catching up with current requests!

I am here to read the first episodes of your Episode stories!

Just please fill in these deets. (You can add more; just meet these minimums.)

  1. Do you want feedback? PLEASE SPECIFY! (I will read regardless.)
  2. Title of Story
  3. Display Name/Author Name on Episode
  4. Cover Picture (optional, but helpful)
  5. Any content warnings? (Gore, trigger warnings, etc.)
  6. Hide #2-5 in a [details] box! I donโ€™t want to scroll down your comment for years. Name your details box the name of your story.

If you donโ€™t do these things, I will not read your story. Itโ€™s disrespectful to expect your readers to accommodate to you.
Those early in the thread, youโ€™re fine. I just updated thread rules.


Sincerely,
Lynne Harper :sparkles:

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Could you read my story
Title Secrets

Author Your._.girl. _.kay

Chapters Three more coming soon!

Genre Drama/Romance

Style Limelight

Description Kaylee Smith is a goody two shoes that doesnโ€™t trust most.What happens when she finds out most of her life was a lie and everyone she trusted was keeping secrets from her?

Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4833837780762624

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Hello!
Thanks for the thread!.
:hugs:

Here is my story info :point_down:t2:

Title: ๐•ธ๐–ž ๐•น๐–Š๐–Ž๐–Œ๐–๐–‡๐–”๐–— ๐–Ž๐–˜ ๐–† ๐•ธ๐–”๐–‡๐–˜๐–™๐–Š๐–—.
Author: Sonder. :woman_technologist:t2:
Instagram: @sonder.episode
Genre: Drama, Romance
Style: Limelight
Story Description: ๐‘€๐‘’๐‘’๐‘ก ๐‘ค๐‘–๐‘ก๐˜ฉ ๐ฟ๐‘’๐‘›๐‘˜๐‘Ž ๐‘…๐‘’๐‘‘๐‘ ๐‘ก๐‘œ๐‘›๐‘’ ๐‘Ž๐‘›๐‘‘ ๐‘๐‘Œ ๐‘š๐‘œ๐‘๐‘ ๐‘ก๐‘’๐‘Ÿ ๐‘๐‘–๐‘˜๐‘™๐‘Ž๐‘ข๐‘  ๐‘…๐‘’๐‘’๐‘๐‘’. ๐ฟ๐‘’๐‘›๐‘˜๐‘Ž ๐‘–๐‘  ๐‘Ž ๐‘ ๐‘ก๐‘Ÿ๐‘œ๐‘›๐‘” ๐‘ค๐‘œ๐‘š๐‘Ž๐‘› ๐‘ค๐‘–๐‘ก๐˜ฉ ๐‘Ž ๐‘”๐‘œ๐‘œ๐‘‘ ๐‘๐‘Ž๐‘๐‘˜๐‘”๐‘Ÿ๐‘œ๐‘ข๐‘›๐‘‘ ๐‘Ž๐‘›๐‘‘ ๐‘๐‘–๐‘˜๐‘™๐‘Ž๐‘ข๐‘  ๐‘–๐‘  ๐‘Ž ๐˜ฉ๐‘Ž๐‘Ÿ๐‘‘ ๐‘š๐‘Ž๐‘› ๐‘ก๐‘œ ๐‘Ÿ๐‘’๐‘Ž๐‘‘. ๐‘Š๐˜ฉ๐‘’๐‘› ๐ฟ๐‘’๐‘›๐‘˜๐‘Ž ๐‘Ÿ๐‘Ž๐‘› ๐‘Ž๐‘ค๐‘Ž๐‘ฆ ๐‘“๐‘Ÿ๐‘œ๐‘š ๐˜ฉ๐‘’๐‘Ÿ ๐‘‚๐‘Š๐‘ ๐‘’๐‘›๐‘”๐‘Ž๐‘”๐‘’๐‘š๐‘’๐‘›๐‘ก ๐‘๐‘Ž๐‘Ÿ๐‘ก๐‘ฆ ๐‘ก๐˜ฉ๐‘’๐‘ฆ ๐‘“๐‘–๐‘›๐‘Ž๐‘™๐‘™๐‘ฆ ๐‘š๐‘’๐‘’๐‘ก. ๐ด๐‘›๐‘‘ ๐‘ก๐˜ฉ๐‘’ ๐‘š๐‘Ž๐‘› ๐‘™๐‘œ๐‘ ๐‘’๐‘  ๐˜ฉ๐‘–๐‘š๐‘ ๐‘’๐‘™๐‘“ ๐‘–๐‘› ๐˜ฉ๐‘’๐‘Ÿ ๐‘ ๐‘๐‘’๐‘›๐‘ก. (๐ฟ๐ฟ) ๐ถ๐˜ฉ๐‘œ๐‘–๐‘๐‘’๐‘  ๐‘ค๐‘–๐‘™๐‘™ ๐‘๐‘’ ๐‘š๐‘Ž๐‘ก๐‘ก๐‘’๐‘Ÿ ๐‘Ž๐‘›๐‘‘ ๐‘ก๐˜ฉ๐‘’๐‘Ÿ๐‘’ ๐‘ค๐‘–๐‘™๐‘™ ๐‘๐‘’ ๐‘œ๐‘›๐‘™๐‘ฆ ๐‘œ๐‘›๐‘’ ๐‘™๐‘œ๐‘ฃ๐‘’ ๐‘–๐‘›๐‘ก๐‘’๐‘Ÿ๐‘’๐‘ ๐‘ก. (๐ผ ๐‘“๐‘–๐‘›๐‘‘ ๐‘ ๐‘ก๐‘œ๐‘Ÿ๐‘–๐‘’๐‘  ๐‘ค๐‘–๐‘ก๐˜ฉ ๐‘š๐‘ข๐‘™๐‘ก๐‘–๐‘๐‘™๐‘’ ๐‘™๐‘œ๐‘ฃ๐‘’ ๐‘–๐‘›๐‘ก๐‘’๐‘Ÿ๐‘’๐‘ ๐‘ก๐‘  ๐‘ข๐‘›๐‘Ÿ๐‘’๐‘Ž๐‘™๐‘–๐‘ ๐‘ก๐‘–๐‘.)

๐–ณ๐—๐—‚๐—Œ ๐—‚๐—Œ ๐—‡๐—ˆ๐— ๐–บ ๐—Ž๐—Œ๐—Ž๐–บ๐—… ๐—†๐—ˆ๐–ป๐—Œ๐—๐–พ๐—‹ / ๐—†๐–บ๐–ฟ๐—‚๐–บ / ๐—€๐–บ๐—‡๐—€๐—Œ๐—๐–พ๐—‹ ๐—Œ๐—๐—ˆ๐—‹๐—’. ๐–ณ๐—๐—‚๐—Œ ๐—‚๐—Œ ๐—†๐—ˆ๐—‹๐–พ ๐—…๐—‚๐—„๐–พ ๐–บ ๐—Œ๐—๐—ˆ๐—‹๐—’ ๐–บ๐–ป๐—ˆ๐—Ž๐— ๐—๐—ˆ๐— ๐–ผ๐–บ๐—‡ ๐—๐—๐—ˆ ๐—Œ๐—๐—‹๐—ˆ๐—‡๐—€ ๐–ผ๐—๐–บ๐—‹๐–บ๐–ผ๐—๐–พ๐—‹๐—Œ ๐–ผ๐–บ๐—‡ ๐–ฟ๐–บ๐—…๐—… ๐—‚๐—‡ ๐—…๐—ˆ๐—๐–พ ๐–พ๐–บ๐–ผ๐— ๐—ˆ๐—๐—๐–พ๐—‹ ๐–บ๐—‡๐–ฝ ๐—๐—ˆ๐— ๐—๐—ˆ๐—‹๐—„๐—Œ ๐—๐—๐–พ๐—‚๐—‹ ๐—‹๐–พ๐—…๐–บ๐—๐—‚๐—ˆ๐—‡๐—Œ๐—๐—‚๐—‰.

๐—–๐—ต๐—ผ๐—ถ๐—ฐ๐—ฒ๐˜€ ๐˜„๐—ถ๐—น๐—น ๐—ฏ๐—ฒ ๐—บ๐—ฎ๐˜๐˜๐—ฒ๐—ฟ ๐—ฎ๐—ป๐—ฑ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ ๐—ถ๐˜€ ๐—ฎ ๐—ฝ๐—ผ๐—ถ๐—ป๐˜ ๐˜€๐˜†๐˜€๐˜๐—ฒ๐—บ ๐˜„๐—ต๐—ถ๐—ฐ๐—ต ๐˜„๐—ถ๐—น๐—น ๐—ฐ๐—ต๐—ฎ๐—ป๐—ด๐—ฒ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ ๐—ฝ๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ต ๐˜†๐—ผ๐˜‚โ€™๐—น๐—น ๐˜„๐—ฎ๐—น๐—ธ.

Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4728753642864640

Stay Safe :yay:

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Here is mine! Iโ€™d love any feedback you have :slightly_smiling_face:

Title: The Split Kingdom

Release Date: OUT NOW!

Description: The Ice Queen declared war on your kingdom, In retaliation, your king has a plan. 5 citizens will infiltrate the Ice kingdom, with one nearly impossible goalโ€ฆ

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Features:
Point System
Choices Matter
CC
Mini-games
Advanced Directing
Multiple Playable Characters

episodeinteractive.com

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Squad: The Split Kingdom

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

My Instagram (for more info, sneak peaks, trailers and updates): https://www.instagram.com/zaywrites.episode/

A sneak peak for my story: https://www.instagram.com/p/CA04RDeFfnQ/?utm_source=ig_web_button_share_sheet

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I love the cover art! Oh, my freaking goshโ€ฆ :star_struck:

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thanks for this thread : D!


Molly's Card 2 BT
id like a rating through PM : ))
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Aww, thank you!

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Do you want me to PM you when I finish and give feedback? Whatโ€™s your preference? :sparkles:

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Yep! A pm sounds great :smile:

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Title- Breaking Boundaries

Cover-

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Description- Noelle, a cheerleader whoโ€™s passionate about football, wants to prove that football isnโ€™t just for the boys.
Will she be able to break the boundaries?

Link-http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4671208766111744

IG- @faithxprincessx

Pm for feedback and rating

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would you be interested in beta reading my unpublished story and give opinions on how to improve?

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Yes I would like if you would tell me your opinion about my story in pm
And here is my story
Enjoy :cherry_blossom:
Author :- flare

Description:- Under some Circumstances you will have to act as Psychologist at the house of the riches people in the country , will you mange to keep your identity hidden ?

Genres :- Drama , Romance .

Current chapters :- 4 (on going )

style :- LL

Choices matter

Points system

You can customize the main charecter and name it the way you want !

Cover :โ€”โ€”โ€”

Link :

Omg thank you so much for this thread Iโ€™d appreciate it so muchโ€‹:heart::heart::heart:

Author: Alyna M
Title: Whoโ€™s She
Genre: Romance/Drama
Episodes: 10 out (more to come!)
Description: They hate her. He loves her. She was the outcast. He was the golden boy. She put his baby brother in a coma and now sheโ€™s back home better than everโ€ฆ and heโ€™s plotting his revenge.
**Style:**Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4565714562383872

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Thank you for this thread! I recently published my first episode story and Iโ€™m always open to feedback :orange_heart:

Title : False Faรงades
Genre: Mystery
Episodes: Three
Author: Nala
Instagram: nala.episode
Description:
Follow Kennedy as she unearths the truth behind her motherโ€™s murder with help from a handsome stranger and an old flame. Fully customizable characters, two love interests, and choices matter!
Recommended For: Fans of romance, mystery, whodunits, and everything in-between.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4834815510249472
Cover:

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I havenโ€™t promoted my story in a while, so why not?
Title: Bleeding Roses
Genre: Action/SciFi
Episodes: 5
Author: Writerโ€™s Block
Description: Salem should have been a pianist, but sometimes things donโ€™t go as planned. So trained as an assassin, he attempts to survive after his life is put on the line.
Features: Mini games in each episodes, limited vcc, custom poses/animations, minimal romance, plenty of murder, my sarcastic commentary, one sound in the entire story (see insta for details), multiple MCs, art scenes

Link:

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5676327982268416

Cover:

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Official Trailer:

https://www.instagram.com/p/CECt0MwlbGQ/

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hi!! thank you so much for the thread :relaxed: if you have any advice or constructive criticism for me please DM me. thanks again!

hereโ€™s mine!

Story: The Good Things That Badgirls Do
Author: kaycie
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 8 (ongoing!)
Description: One girl runs her mouth, and the other one runs her foot across peopleโ€™s faces. After fighting for what they believe in, theyโ€™ve been exiled to public school and find new hot prey to deal with.
Style: Limelight
Instagram: @kaycie.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6157247634931712

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This is my story. I would love some feedback, you can just PM me, when youโ€™ve read it. :blush:

Story Title: Something About You LL

Author: Soupy (Insta soupy.writes)

Style: Limelight

Chapters: 3 (so far)

Genre: Romance

Description: The most popular and hottest boy in school finds out the schoolโ€™s social outcastโ€™s secret. Is she cooler than he thought? Will they believe in rumors or get to know each other? full CC


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Could you please read mine?
I would appreciate a rating or feedback๐Ÿ’•
Here is my story:
Title: Still Strong
Ig: lyra.episode
Description: youโ€™re a rich and famous athlete with a horrible past. Heโ€™s your new manager and ex-football star. What are you willing to do for each other? Will you let him in?
Link:


Ty!

Yesss thabk you for the thread :slight_smile:
I would like a rating :slight_smile:

Genre : Fantasy/ Adventure
Chapters : 9
Link: https://linktr.ee/kennedymolly97

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I only have 1 1/2 episode so itโ€™s not published, but hereโ€™s the link anyway: