Will read your first episode and tell you my opinion! CLOSED!

I’ll read your first episode and tell you want I think of it. I will be honest and will also tell you what to improve. Fell free to drop your stories!


Your welcome to read mine, I love hearing peoples opinions, even if they are a bit critical, so I can improve for the future.

title : Scorn Heir.
Includes multiple love interest of both genders. Full CC of MC, limited of Love interest. Mini-games, point system, no early acces or skip the wait, in this story,
Directing: I will say I am a pretty Advance coder. and I made sure there are no mistakes
Genre: Fantasy
Description: After a tragedy befalls the royal family, you’re forced to take the throne. But will you thrive or fail when a ghost gets in the way and someone else tries to claim the throne too?

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5932970744676352

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I would appreciate it if you could read Mine!

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Oki I’ll start with yours! and the @Yoshi and then @Raitlyn


Name: A Model of Love

Author: Shiran k. AKA mehasels!

Chapters: 17

Story description: You are paving your way as a young, professional model. What happens when Matthew Santos, the new guy, shows you life beyond the catwalk? (Limelight, full customization, art scenes)

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5353144010997760



First of all, I love how you put customization visiual! Second of all I love your story and I love when the MC is talking about how Chasity is a troublemaker and you show the scene of the pig and the bucket instead of putting a black scene. I suggest you to put more music like how you put sounds in the beginning of the chapter like in the scene where they tell the MC that she will be queen like you can put a dramatic music or sound! I love how you put timed choice, btw I got them all wrong with the class thing. :rofl: And the end of the chapter you put the credits, we can tap on the names to see which background is from who.I love the story and I can’t wait to continue the story! I added it to my favorites!
For real I love it.


Be honest and blunted

Title- Breaking Boundaries


Description- Noelle, a cheerleader who’s passionate about football, wants to prove that football isn’t just for the boys.
Will she be able to break the boundaries?


IG- @faith_rose_episode

I’m in the process of revamping my story any tips or criticism greatly appreciated!!

I try to do music, but I am sound sentitive so its very unpleasent for me to add. sometimes I also just cant figure out what fit to scenes,

els thank you for all the compliments, I am happy you enjoyed reading the chapter. and that you wanna continuie reading it. I hope you will continuie to enjoy it.

that suck. sorry to hear

yeah started doing that with an older story and been doing it ever since, its very east to do actually, take five minutes to code.

thank you :pleading_face: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :hearts:

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Hi, I’d love to hear your opinion about my story :blob_hearts:

Title: The Fixer
Genre: Drama/Romance
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5771622302416896
Instagram: @dynastywrites
Description: Power, money and influence. This successful Hollywood fixer has the perfect life. But when someone from her past comes back for a favor, everything is about to change.
Extras: Full CC for MC and LIs + 2 LIs + Point System + Choices Matter :sparkles:

You can read mine, if you like. :yellow_heart: I’m interested in hearing your opinion on it!

I’d love to hear your opinion about mine as well if you have time.

Moved to Share Feedback since you’re doing reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :smiley:

Hi, love to hear your opinion on my story as well. :slight_smile:

I read your first story called Dl:from the sidelines and i like it. I like that u put some music and let us custimize. The only thing i suggest u to do is put some choices and idk it it just the first chapters that don’t have choices. I love your story but sci-fi isn’t really my type of things to read but i love it! Great work :heart:.
And i just read this story cause other people are waiting and i want to give everyone a chance!!:heart::heart:


First of all Great job. I love your story. I love how you gave us lots of choices and how you describe everything in a simple way like how the MC and her bff are like family that’s so cute :sneezing_face:. And i added the story to my favorites i’ll continue the story as well.
btwI love the overlays in the beginning of the chapters!!:heart::heart:

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The cover is just :heart_eyes::star_struck::star_struck:!! The overlays footballs in the beginning of the chapter and the gif thing u did for the turn up your volume thing are just awesome!! I added to my favorites. I have literally no suggestions for u! :heart::heart:

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Thank u! :heart:

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Oh thank you so much :heartbeat: appreciate it!

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Here’s mine

  • Title: The Masked Revenant
  • Genre: Sci-fi
  • Style: LL
  • Description: Play as Mack, a victimised woman in a nuclear explosion struggling to control her inner devil as she solves the mystery that lies in the Abyss of 2020.
    (CC, 3LI, CM, 3 Endings)
  • Chapters: 3
  • Instagram: @evlyng_swan & @sm._.writes
  • If you do read it, please let us know your opinions through fanmails.
  • Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6189026855026688
  • Cover (Credit to Mia on IG)