Willing to give feedback/edit for free!


#1

I’ve got some free time tonight so if anyone wants a second opinion I’m happy to help!
Just pm me the script and I’ll have a look!


#2

I’ll PM you now. :wink:


#3

Do you want me to edit also or just look?


#4

What do you mean?


#5

If there are any minor coding mistakes I can fix them if you like?
Send me the script of what you’ve written and I can take a look


#6

Oh okay. Could you beta read the episodes instead? I’ve PM’ed you the link.


#7

hey, can you read my story and give me a review? the script is too long to pm to you, turns out episode has a message limit. while reading if you notice any mistakes or anything just point 'em out, give out some tips to make the story flow better… things like that!

Title: Over Before You Know It
Description: You and your best friend make a suicide pact to go to the Grand Canyon and end it all together. Will you both really do it? Or will it be over before you know it?
Number of Episodes: 6 and counting
Instagram: @lizard.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6584190301765632 2 2


#8

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