Murder. Mystery. Old love and new love. A small town’s darkest secret.
When Detective Michael Caffery returns to his hometown with his daughter Penelope, the last thing he expects is to get caught up in a young starlet’s disappearance.
When his daughter becomes the next target and the truth begins to ravel before his very eyes, he begins to wonder if the incidents that plague his own past weren’t so coincidental after all…
CC | LGBT OPTIONS | MINIGAMES | YOUR CHOICES MATTER
Hi all! As previously implied, I’m currently working on my very own story, Tulua Rising. This isn’t the first story I’m publishing on Episode, but the last one I put the same amount of time into was back when I was in middle school and Classic was the only style. I’m sure you can guess how that went.
With that being said, my first chapter for this is just about done! I’ve already got a quarter done with chapter two as well, but it’s nowhere near my perfectionist levels just yet. At this moment in time, I am looking someone to proofread and offer firm critique on Chapter One, in exchange for proofreading and firm critique on theirs.
What I am looking for in particular: Firm (not harsh!) critiquing, catching any scripting or grammatical errors and constructive criticism. I would also like to know which choices you chose and if anything came out of the choices, such as impressing a character.
In exchange for your time, I offer the same for you- firm critiquing, catching any errors and constructive criticism! If you’re interested, please do not drop a link to your story. You will be ignored. Instead, please simply comment if you’d like to proofread, tell me a little about yours and we can discuss further in DMs.
Thanks in advance!