Hey, I’m Maris and I’m currently writing my first story and it’s been in the works for about 6 months now. I’ve only written 6 chapters though because it takes me anywhere between 2-4 weeks to complete one chapter. (I know crazy right?) I’ve been thinking about whether all the work that I put into this story is worth it or not and I want another opinion or multiple. I would like y’all to be honest about my narration., dialogue, plot, characters, and directing. You can tell me if I should add more or reel it in a bit. I would appreciate if you could read all 6 chapters before giving me feedback and if there are any punctuation or grammar mistakes I would love to be notified about those too.
Story title- Forbidden Remedies
Discription- A broken girl and a jaded boy. When one mistake brings their two worlds together will they be able to heal each other?
Link to the story- http://episodeinteractive.com/r/s/6149960510406656
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