Would anyone like to review my story and give me very honest feedback?

I would love to get some honest feedback.
Here’s my story details:

Title: Rumors From Heaven (LGBTQ+)

Author: Maggie

Description: After you die in a car accident, you find out that Heaven and Hell are not as different as they seem. Can you uncover the lies and secrets of the companies, while falling in love?

Full cc for mc and Lis, there’s 2 love interests

Genre: Drama

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5330963774242816

Thank you.

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