Would Appreciate Reviews/Tips on my first Story on Episode: Still Silent

Hi all,

I’ve published the first 3 chapters of my first story on the Episode app. Any and all feedback is welcomed and super appreciated! :slight_smile:

Title: Still Silent
Author Profile: Ada Larke
Genre: Drama/Romance
Version: Limelight
Description: Due to troubling circumstances, you’re forced to move back to your hometown in the hopes of a fresh start… but that fresh start isn’t what you thought it would be.
Story Link: http://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5190749735944192

Thanks for your time! :heart:

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