I just finished writing/coding 3 chapters for a story I’ve had in the back of head for a few years.
Even though I’ve gone through each chapter a ton of times, I think fresh pairs of eyes would help a lot.
I’d also like to know if it remains interesting and would make readers want to continue reading.
There is some Spanish in it but translations are included. Readers can also choose the LI’s gender.
If anyone is interested in helping, please let me know and I’ll pm you the story link!