Would Like Honest Feedback on Romance/Thriller (Guilty Pleasure Read)


#1

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Title: Love Me, CONTROL Me
Author: OhhGlam92
Episodes: 10 (Not Completed)
Genre: Romance/Thriller
Description: Your ex-love is sensing something eerie about your seductive new beau. Can you come to your senses before its too late? Or is the intensity everything you’ve ever wanted?
LINK to the story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6558546852052992

If anyone can read and give me feedback, it’s greatly appreciated! I have a lot of fun writing this! It’s a fun, guilty pleasure story, so I just need some fun and laid back feedback/reviews/critiques. If you really love the story, please share it wherever you can!
The story is continuing and it’s going to gradually get more and more intense. Thrillers are right up my alley! If you like full on romance, a dash of comedy, with thrill and suspense, you’ll love this story!

Thank you so much! :grin:


#2

Who made the photo?


#3

I made the cover myself. :slight_smile:


#4

Is this a feedback thread? Cause I’ll do the same.

Story Name: Simple to Chaos
Description: Two Best friends take a turn for the worst when a school shoot-out happens and they’re the names a gang member is calling for.

Genre: Action/Adventure
Sub-Genres: Mystery, Thriller, Drama, Romance
Some tags: CC, Choices, LGBTQ+, Trailblazer, Cliche-Breaker,

Instagram : @lee.lee_26
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6065730015199232

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#5

Hi BlueTopaz. No this is not a feedback thread per se. Just wanting some initial feedback for my story. I will add your story and check it out, please do the same. Thanks!


#6

Could anyone read through my first 10 chapters and give me honest feedback? I’d really appreciate it! Thanks :slight_smile: Tell me which guy you like the best!