Would like someone to read/review my story, in return will read/review yours


#1

I just recently began writing a story called Love Doesn’t Exist. I was hoping
I could get some feedback on it before I continue to write. I’ve only written the first two episodes so it’s just a preview so far.
Here is a short description: You started out as a 22 year old escort who believed love was a sham, but things changed. As time passed by & new people came along, you began to question everything you once believed. (CC) M/F love interests, and choices matter!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5558636579782656
In return, I will read and review your story. I will grade the quality of your story and give a score out of 100. Please do not be offended by your score, this is just in my opinion. I will be doing every as fast as I can.


#2

Hi, RKN!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. This is my first story ever but I have put a lot of effort in it and would highly appreciate any feedback! I am also happy to read your story if you read 4 chapters of my story. (I promise, it will keep you hooked :blush: )

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af


#3

Hey! I would love it if you read my story!
Here are my story details!

Title: H & V: Deadly Love
Author Name: Afra S.
Description: Adriana is preparing for her wedding unaware of her past which isn’t as normal as she thinks. After a meeting with her parents she discovers a secret which changes her life forever.
Chapters: 3 chapters (Ongoing)
Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Mystery (You will find it in the Fantasy section)
Style: Ink
Additional details: Includes character customization, LGBT love interests, Your choice matters.
Instagram: @episode_afra
Story Cover:
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Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5352352244957184


#4

I will read yours as well.

H & V: The Hacker Chronicles

Genre: Adventure
Follow three best friends on an epic post-apocalyptic quest to find the rightful heir to the throne!

90% customized backgrounds! Choices Matter You Play All Three Characters


#5

Cool, I’d love some honesty!

OK, I’m super stoked about this story so I hope ya’ll give it a read!

Why should you read it? Well it’s pretty funny I think, but the story has a deeper meaning to it later on. Maybe you’ll be able to pick up on some of it early on.
It’s funny but it’s going to make you think.

All in all, let me know what you guys think. Hope you enjoy… I plan on completing this story.

Title: Flashback Friday
Author: Daisy W.
Genre: Comedy/Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Everly Jones is your typical stuck up popular teenage girl who we all want to punch in the face.Her life is perfect.Until the universe’s twisted sense of humor teaches her a lesson.


Thaaaaannks!
_Daisy


#6

HI there! I’m also a new writer who just published her first story and would also love some feedback. I will let you know as soon as I finish reading your story. Here are the details of mine:
Title: H & V: Lie to me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Genre: Mystery/Drama with romantic subplots
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released.But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664
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#7

Hi ! I would love to check your story out! Send me a DM on instagram to send u screenshots :wink:
So here’s my story if you’re interesed in reading it! :slight_smile:
Here’s my story:
Title: Girlhood
Author: Oumnia
Genre: Drama
Description: Kethius might seem like any ordinary teenage boy but in fact he hides a unique secret…
Number of Episodes: 8 (ongoing)
Instagram: @oumniaepisode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5172961657356288


#8

Hey, I would really love to read your storie. when I’m done I whill print screen here.
I’ll leave the details of my storie in case you want to check it out and do a review as well.:slight_smile:
Title: Shattered Souls
Type:romance
Style: Ink
Description: What happens when two shattered souls find each other? Will love prevail?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5150158950367232


#9

Hi ! I would love to check your story out! Please DM in instagram to share screenshots :wink:
So here’s my story if you’re interesed in reading it! :slight_smile:
Here’s my story:
Title: Girlhood
Author: Oumnia
Genre: Drama
Description: Kethius might seem like any ordinary teenage boy but in fact he hides a unique secret…
Number of Episodes: 9 (fully released)
Instagram: @oumniaepisode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5172961657356288


#10

Hello there, @RKN!

Thank you for creating this thread!

I’m a new author on Episode and I just published my first story.

Story Title: Your Secret Admirer
Author: EpisodeCray
Description: What happens when Natalia’s secret love letter ends up in the hands of the wrong boy? Will she fall in love or will everything fall apart?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4654341800198144

I will read your story soon and message you about it! I hope you’ll enjoy my story.

Thank you!

X


#12

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#13