Would love a story review

It isn’t out yet, it has about 900 lines (of directing and dialogue), here’s some extra info:
Name: Deception
Genre: Fantasy
Description: Lies, secrets, drama. Old friends come back into your life after you went hiding on Earth. Your objective?- Kill your father before he kills everybody else.
pm me if you’re bored and you’d like to check it out, I’d gladly give anyone who wants to try it a read/follow on ig. <3333

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