Would love for people to read my story and give me feedback! TIA! :-)

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This is my first story so as the story progresses my techniques advance to improve the story.
Title: Chase My Love
Author: Miss Mac
Episodes 13 (ongoing)
Genre: Drama, Romance, Mystery, Thriller, Gang, Love, Mature,Exciting, and much much more…
Style: INK
Plot Summary: Clarissa, (Clar), is an average girl with an average live. Her world is turned upside down when she moves to follow her dreams and she meets wealthy business man Chase. Drama seems to happen ever since meeting Chase. She is torn between two men in her life and she has to choose. The person she loves or the person she is in love with. Chase is under the impression he is set up for life taking over the family business. However, he is totally oblivious to the other part of his family and heritage which will put him on another track in life.
Link: Chase My Love! Check it out! http://bit.ly/EpisodeHere #episode


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