Would love some feedback on Rise of Uthutia

Just published my story the other day and I’d love for people to read it and give me legit input. Let me know what could be better. I’m all for corrective criticism if it means making my story better.

Rise of Uthutia
Episodes: 3 (on going)
Style: Limelight
Genre: Fantasy / Action / some Romance
Description: You are the first woman born into the Cedalon family in hundreds of years, because of the Raebezia contract and regulations you must take a Prince in order to ascend to the throne. But upon your Coronation day, your world is turned upside down as your kingdom is overthrown. You must make determinative decisions in order to gain or lose allies as you fight to take back Uthutia. Do you have what it takes?
CC / CC of Love Interest / Choices Matter / Mini-Games / Art Scenes


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I’ll check it out. Always looking for new stories.

Thank you! Let me know what you think and what could be done better!

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