Would someone being willing to review my story?

Hi guys! I just released my first story. This is my first time writing and I would love to hear some honest and constructive feedback. I would highly appreciate it. I need as much advice as I can get. Thank you so much!
Name: Jacinth
Author Name: tanji
Chapters: 5 (more coming soon)
Style: LL
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Summary: Jacinda is forced to take the place of her twin sister in an arranged marriage. Will Jacinda successfully pretend to be the other twin, or will the enemy find out her identity?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4813164075220992


Hi! I’m willing to give you some feedback. I’ll message it to you when I can :dizzy:

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Thank you so much!! :slight_smile:

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