Would someone like to review my story?

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Hi guys, I need your help. Can you review my story Rush? It’s new and has a very few reads, and I want some feedback.

Here is the link, let me know your opinion on it :slight_smile:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4983779724427264

Also you can find me on instagram alexxandra.episode.

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My service sucks at the moment but I’m going to bookmark this and read it later =) do you want feedback left here or would you prefer a PM?

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You should post a short description about the story as well. :slight_smile:

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you can give me a feedback here :smile:
thank you :heart_eyes:

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oh sorry, here’s the description:

Your world turns upside down when an unlikely friend, who also happens to be a recruiter for the illegal street races, exposes you to the underground racing world of New York.

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Ooh sounds interesting I’m going to check it out now :slight_smile:

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I really enjoy your directing style! You are good with overlays and other wise. My only criticism so far is that your use of text animations is kinda over kill.

But overall I’m really enjoying it so far :slight_smile:

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is it published?

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Thank u so much :blush:

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yes, it is, here’s the link
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4983779724427264

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