Would this description "lure" you into reading the story?

Martha West. One of the best detectives out there. Join her into trying to solve her own mystery, as well as her life.

EDIT: After solving one of the most famous cases of all time, the Black Dahlia, Martha West has to solve her own case, as well as her life.

yeah make it a little bit more specific on how martha west became one of the best detectives out there, but just a little information.

After solving one of the most famous cases of all time, the Black Dahlia, Martha West has to solve her own case, as well as her life.

how’s this one?

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that’s even more better! it would surely lure some people into reading your story!

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thanks!

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