'would you give it a read?

“The downfall of King Soren Villarreal bands together an unlikely alliance between seven striking individuals to create the biggest scandal New York has ever seen.”

any advice? anything to change? all feedback is welcome !

I’d read it… Is REDEMPTION the title? Because if so I’d change it to something else… I’m not good at titles but that’s just my opinion! Here are some suggestions!

  • Scandal of Seven

But what do I know? Now I feel bad for criticising your title… Sorry!

redemption is the title. girl, don’t feel bad for giving me feedback. god, i need all the help i can get, thank you ! how is the synopsis, does it seem somewhat “readable” AHAHA

Oh yeah, it’s fine… I’d read it for that!

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