Hey guys,
This is author Shuba, I’ve just started my first story and completed my first episode. I would love to have a feedback from you all. This is the story link --> http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4983182282063872
I haven’t published yet, so your passes are safe.
Hope to get feedbacks reg grammar and “do you find my story interesting” etc…
Thank you guys.
Thank you, WinterMoon05. I will check out. 
No problem. 
Closing due to one month of inactivity 