Would you give me a feedback?

Hey guys,
This is author Shuba, I’ve just started my first story and completed my first episode. I would love to have a feedback from you all. This is the story link --> http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4983182282063872
I haven’t published yet, so your passes are safe.
Hope to get feedbacks reg grammar and “do you find my story interesting” etc…
Thank you guys.

Check out my thread for feedback: A Review For A Read! [CLOSED]

Thank you, WinterMoon05. I will check out. :grinning:

No problem. :smile:

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: