Would you read my story?

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Name- Downfall
Description- People are after you, Quinn. You’ve committed horrendous crimes. You run the biggest mafia alongside your brother, Zac. And you’re only 18. They don’t want you to succeed. But what happens when you receive a letter from your biggest rival? What is he offering? When love, betrayal and enemies stand in your way, what will be your downfall? That is if you even fall …
Comments - Can you tell me what you liked and what would make it seem better in order for it to be a better story.
Thank you, I will take constructive criticism on board ! :hearts: :blush:


#2

Also, if you want to know more or have any ideas for me, message me either on here or on my Instagram - amy.xox_episode


#3

I would definatly read this


#4

Okay, thank you :slight_smile:


#5

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


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