SO, I’m writting a story, Tiffany, and I was wondering if this would catch your attention, and what I could do to make it look better?
D E S r i P t i O n :
Tiffany. How… UNFORTUNATE. This is your, what… Third “friend”? Oh, honey… Please… For once… Listen to who knows BEST…
So, if you think anything can be changed/improved, let me know!
I really like the style of the description but it’s really vague. Looking at the description is supposed to give you hints on what the story is about so you can decide to read it or not. This description leaves you wondering, but I feel like people wouldn’t read it because it’s just so vague
Ok, thank you.
I really suck at… Summing things up. But, I’ll try to fix it up.
I really like the style of it. If you just add what the “third one” was I think that that would be enough
What genre is this supposed to be?
Mystery, Drama, Adventure
The description needs works.
I personally wouldn’t catch my attention and I love mystery and drama.
Yeah… Are you good at writting descriptions? Because it is not something I’m cabable of (at least, not well).
I struggled with mine for a while.
I guess as your progress with your story, it should come nature to you.
Yeah. Yeah, you’re right.
Everything is awesome except the description
It should be more eye catching
Also, in the small cover, I don’t know if you meant to do this or not but the letter ‘A’ is missing in dangerous, I don’t know if it was supposed to be like that but I’m just pointing that out.
If you need a description, this thread might be able to help you
If anyone needs help with coming up with a solid description for their story…follow the requirements below !
For the cover, try adding a black fog/aura around the girl in the middle to add contrast.
If you want, I can help you out with the description.
Really? That would really help.