I’m currently working on a story and I’m not sure if it’s good so I need someone’s feedback and help.
Cara’s mom gets a phone call that her old-time friend is moving back to town, so Cara’s mom (Audrey)
asks Cara to show her friend’s kids around town. Cara gets into a love triangle and can’t seem to get out of it (Isaac) (Noah) (Xavier) although their sister seems to despise Cara for a valid reason. Throughout the rollercoaster, Cara finds out they’re vampires, at first, she freaks out but then she takes it well. (there will be a lot of plot twists and great adventures.)