Hey girl,
I have a few questions…
It’s definitely good…
I’m really curious so I should read it out of curiosity!!! 
Why are you doubting??
Is this your first story??
When it is… Try to make writing fun for you…
'Cause I am also writing (several stories) and I got bored after a few episodes…
But don’t give up!! If you need more advice, help or you are stuck with something…
You can always ask me, you can look for help at the Episode-Guide or you could watch the Episode-tutorials of Joseph Evans at Youtube.com (they are very useful, too 
)
Love A-W