I just started writing a new story called “The Believer’s Curse”. It’s a romance story with a bit of fantasy (from what it is called The Believer’s Curse), and I would like you nice writers from the Creator’s Corner to give me your opinion on it.
Genre: Romance and Fantasy
Description: Blaire falls for a boy she then discovers is cast by the Believer’s Curse.
Story: September 2018, Blaire, 19, joins DIC (DiveWest International College), British Columbia. She finally sees her best friend which she didn’t see for the last year. At DIC, she meets Howen, a pretty boy from her class whom seems to keep his distance from others. Curious, Blaire decides to investigate his case and discovers he is cursed.
The rest is up for people who will read it if it ever comes out.
Thank you all for your opinions below, it is really appreciated.