Would you read this?

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#1

THIS STORY IS NOT OUT YET
tell me what you think

name: Mr Bad Boy and Mrs Bad Girl
description: Your the most powerful gang leader. Your going on an undercover mission to kill your BIGGEST rival. Will love get in your way? (Character Customisation)

I want to prove the female stereotypes wrong and have no damsle in distress but I know I added ‘LOVE’ but it can’t hurt to have some love to make the story interesting


#2

In my opinion, the story sound kind of cliche because it involves a bad boy and gangs… but it’s not a bad thing. I do love the idea that the girl MC won’t be the damsel in distress, cause like the girl is always so helpless in gang stories :roll_eyes: Would I read it? I love the description, as a reader I would most likely click on your story. However, if the story is well developed then I would most likely continuing reading.


#3

In my opinion it sounds like a good story and I think your idea of proving female stereotypes wrong is a great idea. As long as it’s well developed and intriguing then I wouldn’t put it down ! :slight_smile:


#4

Thank you


#5

Thank you so much I appreciate this


#6

Don’t thank me ! Good luck writing it and when it’s published I’ll give it a read


#7

I really love your support and positivity


#9

I don’t mind it’s about gangs but what I would suggest is that the gang rival is not a love interest but a true villain of the story. Also, it would be cool if he had some backstory and his character developed as we go further. It would add a depth to the character and made it more interesting and realistic. But that’s my personal opinion :slight_smile:
As Vivi said, I find awesome that MC is a strong woman and can take care of herself. I’d love to read it when it’s out even though I’m not into gang stories (mostly because of what I said in my first sentence). Good luck with your story! :blush:


#10

oh the rival is an interest but theres a hidden villain in the story and the rival does have a back story i really love your attitude towards my story


#11

Oh, hidden villain? I love that idea! That’s definitely a plot twist :blush: now I can’t wait to read it


#12

thank you so much


#13

In theory, if I were to see this on the app without having any idea what the story is about, based on the name alone I would not read this story. I think you should try to come up with something
less overt that won’t make people think this is yet another angsty-bad boy/naive-helpless-damsel story.


#14

ok I have no idea what I can name it


#15

Being completely honest, I love that story idea where a female is finally not a hopeless crying person and shes powerful but I don’t like the bad boy one . I would read the first episode and that’s it because I want a nice boy bad boys are wayyy to cliche. :blush:. My opinion , your story.


#16

Thank you so much for sharing I’m trying to make my story the least amount of cliche as possible


#17

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#18

We have the same mind.


#20

What are the prevalent themes of your story? What inspired you to write this story? Is there a movie or song or poem that correlates with the themes or characters of your story?


#21

not really I’ve been reading a lot of action stories lately and i fell in love with them so i wanted to make a unique twisted version of them for example having a female gang leader (which is not very common)


#22

Ugh, this is why I think we shouldn’t have to name our stories before we’ve finished them, you really can’t think of a good title before everything shakes out. That’s why SO MANY STORIES have names that just describe what happens in the story…we basically name our stories like internet porn videos.