Writing a mystery romance story but i'm not sure where it's heading or if it's interesting

Trigger warning: story contains mention of death
The story is about a girl who caused the death of her assistant 3 years ago
she gets fired and lives with her best friend as she has no one to go to anymore
she gets a job at a big fashion company and falls in love with her Boss. She finds out someone has been plotting to ruin her life ad then kill her at the same time she finds out she’s pregnant.
Does the story sound interesting or is there any way i can make it sound better?

You can make it better the plot of death is good …again doing work and being pregnant make that plot with twish and turns that will be good!

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