Writing my first ever story, and I'm a bit lost! Some helping hands?

Hello everyone,

I’m writing my first story and I need some hands to help me! A shout out to @Irridescent_Iguana and @Licorice who gave me feedback and taught me how to preview. I need help on:

Spot directing;
How do I put the spot I want my Avatar to be in my script?

Actions;
I made two avatars hug and one of them hugged the wrong way! How do I make them hug facing each other?
Also, how do I make my avatars perform actions facing the other way?
3rd, How do I make two avatars perform actions at the same time?

Camera;
How do I make the camera show/scan the full backround before my avatar walks in?
How do I make my Avatar already be in the backround when I show and enter it?

Outfits;
How do I make my avatar change her clothes without ‘popping’ into it?
Can someone give me an outfit choice template?

Choices;
How do I make my choices change colour (golden, dark blue,)?
How do I insert a toaster into my script?

Overlays;
How do I put the overlay in a certain position?
Can I edit overlays(e.g.Can I put a picture in the photo frame)?

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Spot directing;
@CHARACTER walks to spot # in zone #

Actions;
@CHARACTER is animation_here AND CHARACTER faces left
&CHARACTER is animation_here AND CHARACTER faces right

@CHARACTER is animation_here AND CHARACTER faces left
@CHARACTER is animation_here AND CHARACTER faces right

&CHARACTER is animation_here AND CHARACTER faces left AND CHARACTER2 is animation_here AND CHARACTER faces left

OR

&CHARACTER is animation_here AND CHARACTER faces left AND CHARACTER2 is animation_here AND CHARACTER faces left

Camera;

@pan to zone # in s

&CHARACTER spot #

Outfit;

@CHARACTER changes into Outfit name

Template by @Dara.Amarie

label dressing_game_1

   CHARACTER

What do I want to wear?

choice (OUTFIT_1)

“Outfit 1” {

@CHARACTER changes into Outfit1

#insert script here

} “Outfit 2” {

@CHARACTER changes into Outfit2

#insert script here

} “Outfit 3” {

@CHARACTER changes into Outfit3

#insert script here

}

   CHARACTER

Do I want to wear this one?

choice

“It’s perfect!” {

#insert script here

} “No, I want to try on the others!” {

goto dressing_game_1

}

To remember which outfit was chosen for later episodes:

if (OUTFIT_1 is “Option 1”) {

@CHARACTER changes into Outfit1

} elif (OUTFIT_1 is “Option 2”) {

@CHARACTER changes into Outfit2

} else {

@CHARACTER changes into Outfit3

}

Choices;

“Add text here” {

To make it gold^^

To have it blue…you can change it in the home page where it Satan speech bubbles

To insert a toaster you needa Create the overlay and upload it into your story.
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overlays;

@overlay NAME create
@overlay NAME opacity 1 in 0
@overlay NAME shifts to # in zone #
@overlay NAME scales to # in zone #

You check the scale and sizes by using directing helper and overlay helper. When you move the overlay collect the numbers and insert them in.

To answer your last question you have to layer it and you layer overlays like this

@overlay NAME moves to layer # in zone #

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@xetic I din’t understand your Camera scanning the full backround bit. What exactly should I put into my script to scan the full backround before my avatar walking in? (default zones)

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Ok guys, I need more help!

How do I make the script remember the Customisation of my avatar in the next episode? So The avatar stays how the reader customises it instead of resetting to the default looks?

It stays the same automatically

@pan to zone 1
@pan to zone 2
@pan to zone 3

Right, sorry about that clumsiness. Thanks

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It worked!

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Ofc and haha no need to apologize

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