Writing Partner needed first story

I need help with certain scenes and dialogue for my story Scars.
Its about a girl who is kidnapped and after getting away runs into a boy and father who helps her into hiding. Then she comes back 9 years later as a badass assassin working for the mafia who helped her hid in the first place, seeing the boy who saved her for the first time in 9 years.

Please let me know if you want to want to read what I have so far to see if it something you would be interested in. I have 2 and a half episodes so far but I need to go back and fix a bit.

sure, I may be able to help.

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Hi