Writing romance/fantasy story - feedback wanted! :)

Hi guys!
So, I’m currently writing my first story. There are some things I’m not really happy about yet, but I don’t know how to change them because to me they are quite important that specific way. So I was curious what people think about the story.
As it is my first story, there probably are things that could be better and I would love to hear them to better my story and my writing! So if you are interested please message me! (if you want more details about the story, you can message me on my insta: epiestherjolene)

Title : Caelia
Author : epiestherjolene
Genre : Romance/Fantasy
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6306433218052096

Love, Esther :smiley:

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aloha! you can ask for a review on my review thread Let me review your story!

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