It looks pretty good, other than I would recommend you keep the journal pages up for a bit longer because while I was reading it, it went away before I had finished.
It looks good…!! But pls don’t gets mad at me because as a reader this makes me thinks what is happen-ing? I-know as author yiou don’t show that much, but add more detail, that’s make it look good for you and you’re readers.! That’s all.!!
It‘s good but like someone said before I’d either show the diary pages longer or show short scenes from other characters. The showing of the diary pages is a little too short to really understand what the story will be about. Also, I followed you on Insta.
Wow, that’s crazy! Hard work really pays off
To be honest it’s a hard thing to say. But this is just me, I personally don’t think it’s a good idea to let people purchase it because 1. you want to give a reasonable price right? Then 2. Yes it was alot of hard work to do on your script but i think it would be okay if you just do a google drive and people have access to it give you credits and then maybe you can give like a template on how you did it on your script. 3. I don’t know also if people would want to pay for a text overlay because you can just search up text overlays online if you get what I mean?
This is true but it takes hours and hours to make them custom
I would give them for free but I can’t trust that everyone will give credit At least if I ask a price for my work then I’ll get something out of it haha
And my overlays are super high quality! Plus I’m going to add a read me in my google drive to explain how to use the template and everything :3 I’ve already made a patreon acc and just need to start uploading!
Hi everyone! I just wanted to give you all an update on what will be in the first 3 Episodes!
So, I am first going to make a bunch of really cool features that I would love for you all to “Beta-Test”. In the meantime, I’m working on writing 6 Episodes, which there-after I will release.
So, until those 6 chapters come out, I will publish 3 chapters with “Beta-Testing” stuff (which I need your help and opinions on!)
Episode / Chapter 1:
(1) Get to know the “Inventory Function”
(2) Get to know the “Write in Diary” function (custom writing animations included)
(3) Get to know how the Points System and Progress System work!
(4) Fully customize Cleo & Bellamy with a CUSTOM CC template
(5) Do a few practice choices to see how the point system works and how it affects your relationships!
(6) End of Episode Q&A
Episode / Chapter 2:
(1) Play the Key Pad Mini Game (made by @Martini_98 )
(2) Play the Cooking Mini Game (made from scratch by me!)
(3) Play the Drawing Mini Game (made from scratch by me!)
(4) Play the Tap and Pan Mini Game (made from scratch by me!)
(5) End of Episode Q&A
Episode / Chapter 3:
(1) Meet the family and fully customize them!
(2) Meet the main characters’ friends and fully customize them!
(3) See how the Points System affects your friends & family!
(4) End of Episode Q&A