MY STORY 
I would be happy if you read and respond honestly:heart:
Title of the story : The Race Of Life
Name of the author : lio
Story genre : Drama
Description : Life is normal if you can call it an incomplete family but how one act can make life a race, the question is if Sofi can take the wheel in her hands and control it ?
Link :http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6192402006409216
Style : Ink
Episodes : 5
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nice. can I recommend cover design?
I’m pretty new at this so you’re reading mine
you take pictures you read
I would be happy to have an honest response and with some tips then I will read yours
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You’re asking me
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no I’m asking fluffy rice
What do you think is more beautiful ?
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Hey wow it was quick you can help me with my hobbies and english conversations is not my language i will be happy if you tell me exactly where the mistakes i will fix
What do you think of a story? It gets interesting only at the end of the 5th
I’m just looking for him what his name is
And I’m sorry to ask this is your real name
As for the bubble of speech I noticed it but on a computer it is different from the phone
number 2
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just want to say, maybe add some more colour? idk just an opinion
thx. also loving the profile pic lol
It was interesting as a living diary
It seems to me that everything is perfect for dialogue. I do not know. Like I said, it ‘s not my language, but it’ s a beautiful flow. And that 's really your life. The costume school like in the movies and what the teacher talked to you did not even separate boys alone.
Girls alone sham😶 and are you now really married to Peter
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There’s a lot of grammatical errors. End your dialogue with a colon. I suggest reading back on your early episodes and fixing them up. Try reading them out loud to see if it makes sense to you.
You can help me and tell me exactly where
access your previous episodes There is an option for this
Hey I’m a new episode writer and I would love if you all could give me feedback, suggestions or tips for my work in progress…Thanks.
Name: Partners In Crime
Style: Ink
Genre- Drama
Description- A difficult past and a job brings Roxanne back to the city where she reunites with an old flame and his gang.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6659589348655104
Instagram: thelastword.episode
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