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Hello! I’m new here and I just wrote my first story. I would appreciate it if people could read my story? I’ll take any criticisms!

Hello! I just read the first two episodes… I would say they’re a bit short, but I like where the story is going!

Random tip, you should zoom in on characters during conversations… that way you can see their expressions :blush:

Hi! are u interested in read for read with me?
Title: The Society (of Haverford)
Author: Scarlett
Genre: Comedy
Style: Limelight

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Hi! can u also read and give feedback on my story? any feedback and read will be very appreciated

Title: The Society (of Haverford)
Author: Scarlett
Genre: Comedy
Style: Limelight

Link: