Hi, I hope you all doing awesome and having a great time. 
I’ve published my story last month and I published the 4th chapter too. I really want to improve this story in any way possible. I need your constructive criticism so I can improve.
I have some questions so I’ll have a more clear idea of what to change.
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Which parts of each episode bored you? What can I do to make them enjoyable?
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Which parts you liked?
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What do you think about the choices in the story? Are they good or unnecessary? What should I change/improve about them?
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How do you feel about Ally and Alex’s relationship?
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Did you feel there are plot holes in the story or something doesn’t make sense for you?
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Did you feel my directing was smooth? And is there anything I can improve about my directing?
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Did you like the comedy side of the story?
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And what do you think of the story in general? Tell me your thoughts.
You can either tell me what you think about it in this topic or my Instagram: @marinaz.episode
Thank you sooo much. 
Here is some info and its link:
Summary
Title : Saving Halloween 
Author : Marina
Description : Ally, a normal human, is now stuck in the supernatural world of Halloween to save it. Is she really the person that Halloween legend says she is? Will she save the Halloween?
Genre : Fantasy and adventure
Sub genre : Romance and comedy
Style : LL
Full CC
1 male LI
Choices
Link :
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5060919051091968
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