Hey, I just finished coding episode one of a story I’ve been working on, if anyone could read it and give me your opinion of feedback that would be super appreciated!
FwI, episode 1 is long but doesn’t represent the length of all the other upcoming episodes.
Right off the bat, it’s important to know that most readers won’t stick around long enough to find this out, even if you have a disclaimer saying future episodes will be longer. It’s best to set standards high right away to keep readers hooked.
That’s cool! Episode 1 being on the longer side (is that correct?) makes sense. The short then long episode mayyy throw off some readers, but only if there’s a big difference I assume.