Hello, This is Blazica Here. I’m the Author of the Story Taming The Devil. It’s not a pretty Famous story. It has around 30,000 reads. I would Like to Know Your Thoughts on it. If You have read it, What did you like about it and What did you not?
Description (Just in case anyone wants to read it):- She is an Angel and He is a Devil. With Her being the only Light in his world of Darkness, Will She Tame the Devil or will His Darkness Ruin Her? Mafia isn’t a safe place Honey!
Please do let me know your Thoughts
Firstly, congrats on your first story.
I commend anyone who can write a story, and the time and hard work that goes into coding it for episode too.
I will be totally honest , I didn’t get past c1 as yet.
As readers, we are all totally different in what we like, what we want to see in a story, what puts us off etc…
So this is just my view. I’ve been reading for years on the app, good grammar is a must for me, but also great concepts, diverse characters etc. . but visuals and attention to details play a part too.
In the opening scenes, your background characters, I felt they lacked attention to detail, the lip colours didn’t look right at all. As this was my impression of your story, it did sadly put me off
Thank you so much for your reply. I will definitely work on improving the background characters and try to make them look Civil 
I imagine it’s a lot if work having many background characters and adding cc and outfits…
I just felt the lip colours were overlooked on some characters.
I do wish you the best of luck with the story, and I hope you get some more varied feedback on this post.
Actually I like doing CC and outfits but I was avoiding it because I thought that they are background characters so they wouldn’t need much. Also I used randomizer for that. (It sucks ik ). But now that you mentioned it, I think I should really look into it. I don’t want the readers to get a bad first impression.
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