Zelda's Story Reviews 💫

Hey I’m extremely bored and have too much passes that I know what to do with, so I just decided I’ll review a couple stories & share some criticism about them! Just letting you know, I’m going to be brutally honest (without being mean) & if you don’t like brutal honesty I suggest you not to link your story here. Other than that, feel free to link your stories & I’ll give a review on it ASAP!
(Let me know if I put this in the wrong category, I’m still a bit new to this :sweat_smile:)

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What do you think on MissMj’s stories??

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Lmao this isn’t what I meant when I created this but thanks for the question anyways!

Honestly, I think her stories are overrated…and I’m trying to say that in the least hateful way possible, lol. I mean she does the same plots over & over, has the same type of MCs who are weak & helpless and have to be saved by some powerful rich man. She puts literally zero effort (in my opinion) in developing her characters…just as she does with trying to add in a little diversity. Her characters all look the same, all act the same, and it’s just the same unrealistic scenario over and over again. Although her grammar in English has improved, looking back at her old popular stories it really makes me cringe…Not to mention the mediocre directing that has a lot of flaws. I’m tired of it :woman_shrugging:t4: I just wish she’d strive to do better in writing her stories because I think she has potential, but sadly she doesn’t care neither does her readers.

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Lmao sorry for asking the “wrong” question. xP, tbh, she has a wonderful episode future ahead of her, but yet she doesn’t put the work in it to make her a little BETTER. (My opinion)

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Agreed!

I can see her trying like said: Aslong as you try your best theres nothing to be ashamed of. {} I mean if she were to be like a little like plot twisting i’d think she’d be a more popular author today ://

instead of having the good people win all the time, aybe like the bad, or have different stories from the bad and good perspectives xPP

i’d love a review if you don’t mind! :grin:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.

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Chapters: 5 (More to come)

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

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Tittle: MC: The Bar on 23rd
Author: Dr.Smile
Description:
When Blade Reynolds encountered a walking target at a bar, he should’ve been dead for the second time. Third, counting when he stupidly fell for Cathy.
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Oh and thank you!

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Hi,
I would love a review,
my story link is http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5097630993022976 . Thank you! :smile:

Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Episodes: 18 (more coming soon)
Instagram: dreamer.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452320906543104

Thanks! :slight_smile:

Thank you :blush:

Hey, hey! I would like a review! I don’t mind brutally honest reviews as to everyone is entitled to their own opinion. I was just wondering if there are any things I could improve on in my early Episodes that may need some improvement. Thanks!

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Title: Loving You Again

Author: Fluffy Rice

Style: Limelight

Chapters: 18 (Ongoing)

Genre: Comedy/Romance

Description: This story focuses on Sierra who is separated from her childhood friend, Peter. After several years apart, they coincidentally reunite in high school without knowing they had a past together. Their relationship starts off rocky as they uncontrollably banter. But once their difference was settled, a loving friendship begins to bloom. Can Sierra and Peter take their relationship to the next level?

Instagram: @fluffyrice.episode

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4771951097544704

OMG Your roast of missMJ. :joy: Anyway, I’d appreciate a review of my story!
Title: 666 Miles

Author: mysoxlike2party

Style: Limelight

Chapters: 4 (Complete)

Genre: Thriller

Description: Roadtrip gets trippy when your GPS freezes at 666 miles away from your destination. Can you save your friends from the evil within? Limited CC/3 Endings

Instagram: @ashadystory

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4735107753443328

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I agree.She isn’t a bad author maybe kinda normal,but if she could focus on a different topic,without a gang/rich man/ saves her.
I want to read the It’s the illusion so I can see the hype.She is not bad but her plot is just the same.

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Moved to Share Feedback since this is for story reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. :wink:

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Hey! So I was able to finish the first chapter and I will say that I honestly liked it! Although I felt the chapter was too long and felt sort of drawn out, I think overall it was a pretty well written first episode. The directing was really nice too! The dialogue seemed natural, the story flowed along nicely, and it was pretty interesting. However, I will say both cliches with the Golden boy with Daddy issues, and the two mean girls who happen to bully the MC a lot kissing the feet of the Golden boy made me sort of cringe. I don’t have a huge issue with certain cliches, but that’s only if it’s written well. I just don’t think it was the case here. I also had a big issue with the fact that I customized my MC to be darkskinned, yet all of my family members had white lips. It made me really sad because I’m sure Dara.Amarie has templates to prevent that. Overall, the story was pretty nice but I’m not sure if I’m going to be reading it a lot more.

Here are images of my family with white lips:

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Please Read :blush:

Here’s a description of my new story:
Title : Figures
Genre : Romance
Episodes : 3 (more soon)
Summary : Bianca just moved from Italy to Manhattan to escape her horrible foster family and her dreadful past. There in Manhatthan she meets a fascinating green eyed man. Will her life be the same or will her past catch up?
Style : Limelight (I will create a INK version too)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5720682964516864

thanks for the feedback! and yeah i’m looking into fixing that! and she doesn’t have a template for that so i’m trying to fix it on my own, it’s just taking a bit of time! also, the cliches are beneficial to the story, because later on it’s revealed that they’re not all just cliche characters but all have deeper backstories behind them! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: thanks for this review and i’ll be sure to take your feedback into consideration! :grin:

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I see! Well in that case I’ll be sure to read more chapters to figure out the characters backstories then. :grin:

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