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Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Episodes: 18 (more coming soon)
Instagram: dreamer.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452320906543104

Thanks! :slight_smile:

Thank you :blush:

Hey, hey! I would like a review! I don’t mind brutally honest reviews as to everyone is entitled to their own opinion. I was just wondering if there are any things I could improve on in my early Episodes that may need some improvement. Thanks!

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Title: Loving You Again

Author: Fluffy Rice

Style: Limelight

Chapters: 18 (Ongoing)

Genre: Comedy/Romance

Description: This story focuses on Sierra who is separated from her childhood friend, Peter. After several years apart, they coincidentally reunite in high school without knowing they had a past together. Their relationship starts off rocky as they uncontrollably banter. But once their difference was settled, a loving friendship begins to bloom. Can Sierra and Peter take their relationship to the next level?

Instagram: @fluffyrice.episode

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4771951097544704

OMG Your roast of missMJ. :joy: Anyway, I’d appreciate a review of my story!
Title: 666 Miles

Author: mysoxlike2party

Style: Limelight

Chapters: 4 (Complete)

Genre: Thriller

Description: Roadtrip gets trippy when your GPS freezes at 666 miles away from your destination. Can you save your friends from the evil within? Limited CC/3 Endings

Instagram: @ashadystory

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4735107753443328

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I agree.She isn’t a bad author maybe kinda normal,but if she could focus on a different topic,without a gang/rich man/ saves her.
I want to read the It’s the illusion so I can see the hype.She is not bad but her plot is just the same.

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Hey! So I was able to finish the first chapter and I will say that I honestly liked it! Although I felt the chapter was too long and felt sort of drawn out, I think overall it was a pretty well written first episode. The directing was really nice too! The dialogue seemed natural, the story flowed along nicely, and it was pretty interesting. However, I will say both cliches with the Golden boy with Daddy issues, and the two mean girls who happen to bully the MC a lot kissing the feet of the Golden boy made me sort of cringe. I don’t have a huge issue with certain cliches, but that’s only if it’s written well. I just don’t think it was the case here. I also had a big issue with the fact that I customized my MC to be darkskinned, yet all of my family members had white lips. It made me really sad because I’m sure Dara.Amarie has templates to prevent that. Overall, the story was pretty nice but I’m not sure if I’m going to be reading it a lot more.

Here are images of my family with white lips:

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Please Read :blush:

Here’s a description of my new story:
Title : Figures
Genre : Romance
Episodes : 3 (more soon)
Summary : Bianca just moved from Italy to Manhattan to escape her horrible foster family and her dreadful past. There in Manhatthan she meets a fascinating green eyed man. Will her life be the same or will her past catch up?
Style : Limelight (I will create a INK version too)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5720682964516864

thanks for the feedback! and yeah i’m looking into fixing that! and she doesn’t have a template for that so i’m trying to fix it on my own, it’s just taking a bit of time! also, the cliches are beneficial to the story, because later on it’s revealed that they’re not all just cliche characters but all have deeper backstories behind them! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: thanks for this review and i’ll be sure to take your feedback into consideration! :grin:

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I see! Well in that case I’ll be sure to read more chapters to figure out the characters backstories then. :grin:

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thank you so much for taking the time to this review! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Would you review my story?
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482084136714240

I was about to post then I realised its you hehehe. Feel free to comment

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I’d love a review :blush:

Title: Delinquent
Author: Josca Denise
Chapters: 3 (more episodes coming soon)
Description: You’re the lead singer in a world famous band. One day all hell breaks loose as an unknown girl steals your bag and you involuntarily get sucked into the criminal circuit.
Cover:


Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5263167807094784
Style: Limelight
Genre: Action, accompanied by romance, drama & comedy.
Specifics: Male MC, CC & choose your sexuality.

Here’s a description of my new story:
Title : Figures
Genre : Romance
Episodes : 3 (more soon)
Summary : Bianca just moved from Italy to Manhattan to escape her horrible foster family and her dreadful past. There in Manhatthan she meets a fascinating green eyed man. Will her life be the same or will her past catch up?
Style : Limelight (I will create a INK version too)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5720682964516864

Story name Vip Brother:Love is…
Authors name Megz_episode
Episodes 4
Instagram name megz_episode7997
How many episode you want me to review 4 are enough
Description A story about 16 celebrities who enter the house of Big Brother uder 24/7 surveillance for 2 months to win the prize of 500 000$, but before that they have to go through all challenges of Big Brother.
I would like you to promote my story.
Style LL
Cover IMG_20190223_164712
Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4977128782561280
So here’s my story feel free to read it. And let me know what you think about it afterwards.

Okay so I read the first chapter and I honestly really liked it! I love how you made a male MC the main character, I loved how you portrayed the anxiety Blake is going through. As someone who has struggled with it in the past, I can say you’ve done it in a very realistic way. The directing is really good also! However, I feel as if the first chapter went by too quickly. It was all happening so fast and I didn’t really have enough time to grasp the concept of everything going on. There’s also too much narration going on in my opinion! Other than that, great job! I will for sure be reading more episodes.

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Thank you! I’m in the process of revamping the first 3 episodes to make sure they’re longer with a lot less narration.

Could you review my story? :slight_smile:
Story name: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5874052041146368
Number of Chapters: 20
Genre: drama
Description: Queen Darja spent 20 years searching for her long lost family. Is it in her destiny to suffer without her love and her child? Who will she become while fighting for her loved ones?

Hello! I’d love some feedback on the first episode of my unpublished story, Blurred Lines.
Let me know and i’ll send you the link via message :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Description: After an intense break up, Quinn enters the world of no strings attached dating. What happens when it turns out there are strings after all, and she’s completely tangled in them?
Genre: Romance
Cover: It’s still being created, but i’ll send you an image of the first sketch if you decide to review my story!

Thank you!