100% honest review

Hey guys! I’m now going to be doing story reviews.


Put the link, plot, and cover image down below and I will let you know what I think! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
(I will get back to you in 1-2 days.)

Waiting list:
Tribe of Malapinchi @JannahJackson COMPLETED
Dreams and Nightmares @RainbowCat
Grid Queen @Daisy_stories
Teacher or Queen? @mystique_writer
I Made The Devil Cry @Sebule
Color my life @Lady_Cannella
Compulsion: @Aims1141
Figures: @writeslondon
Blurred Lines: @elliewrites.episode
Inner Circle: @Em546
Vip Brother:Love is…: @Megz_Episode
Delinquent: @Josca

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How many chapters will you be willing to read?

The whole of the published story

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I have 5 chapters out right now, I would like a review and I would appreciate any feedback :slight_smile:
Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Aaliyah Ali
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 5 (more to come)
Summary: How will Alana, Lucas, Ryan, and Rachel survive their past and conquer their future…
If bad behavior follows them everywhere they go?
cc, and choices available!
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5778189056540672

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My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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Here’s one of my stories:
Dreams and Nightmares by Dreamer
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452320906543104
Plot: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
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That’s my first story, but right now I’m working on a second one, it’s for the contest. Would it be okay if I ask for a review once it’s published? Not sure if you take to requests from one person :sweat_smile:

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Of course

Thanks! :slight_smile:

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Title: Grid Queen
Author: Daisy_stories
Link: Grid Queen
Episodes: 6 (ongoing)
Genre: Drama (Romance & Comedy)
Summery: To make a statement, you’re hiding your identity while driving in F1. But then you meet Geovanni, a 2 times world champion. Can you stay focused and win your own race? (CC)
Style: Limelight
Cover:

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Hi, I would appreciate your feedback on my story :slight_smile:
Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Description: Queen Darja spent 20 years searching for her long lost family. Is it in her destiny to suffer without her love and her child? Who will she become while fighting for her loved ones?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5874052041146368

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Bad Behavior @LiyahxWrites
Plot: This was a super interesting story! I love the flashbacks and the drama with Tina. The plot twists were captivating and kept me wanting more. I do wish that Alana could have more interaction with the mystery girl that put something in her drink. I can’t wait for the next episodes! 9.5/10

Characters: I loved Alana sooooo much! She had a definite personality that never changed. I wish that I could get to know Lucas better in the future episodes. I would also like to know more about his family and mother. 9/10

Grammar: This story had no spelling problems and all of the sentences read nicely. 10/10

Choices: The choices in this story were good and they affected the story nicely. When Lucas is changing clothes, it’s hard to read the writing as it is very tiny. Maybe summarize that clothes choice? 9.5/10

Overall: This story had a lot of great messages. It’s very interesting to read. I will be waiting for the next episodes!
Final Score: 38/40 :heartpulse:

She will interact with her in episode 6.

Flashbacks for Lucas will be coming soon.

His family will be revealed in season 2, they have major roles in season 2… Minor roles in season 1.

I will fix this, It was absolute suicide naming the dressing game lol.

Thank you for reviewing! Thank you for the score and thank you for reading!
I am glad you liked it.

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Hi,
I would love a review, link is http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5097630993022976


Thank you! :slight_smile:

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This is my story!

TITLE : Color my life
AUTHOR : Lady Cannella
GENRE : Action
STYLE : ink
STATUS : on going
EPISODES : 4 (more coming soon)
DESCRIPTION : A mysterious place, a government full of secrets, a girl and the search of colors in a faded world…will you be able to restore the colors?

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Story Name: Compulsion
Author Name: Aimee.A
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6725446713540608
Number of Chapters: 2 and a half lmao (Episode 3 isn’t finished yet you can still read it!)
Genre: I’m not sure yet, it’s closer to comedy though.
Description: Zyro Morte is sent on death row. He’s given the chance to extend his time after the FBI need him for a mission. Simple? One problem, he has to jeopardise his soulmates family!?
Art Style (ink or limelight): INK
Story Cover/Images: not made yet!

Thanks my love! :heart::heart:

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If you read unpublished stories, I’d love some feedback :slight_smile:

Title: Blurred Lines
Author: Ellie
Genre: Romance
Episodes: 1, 2 is almost complete!
Description: After an intense break up, Quinn enters the world of no strings attached dating. But, what happens when it turns out there are strings after all, and she’s completely tangled in them?
Link: I’ll message it to you once I’m on your review list :slight_smile:
Style: Limelight
Cover:

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Story Title: Inner Circle

Author: zapcatini

Instagram: @zapcatini.episode

Genre: DRAMA, romance

Style: Limelight

Episodes: 4 right now, 5 is coming out soon and tbh I’m proud of that one
(also there are some problems with episode one because I updated the template for CC)

Description:

The lives & lies of rich and famous college students aren’t as glamorous as they appear. Scandal, secrets, love and lust. Can you handle a world where rules don’t exist? CC LGBT

Link:

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Story name Vip Brother:Love is…
Authors name Megz_episode
Episodes 4
Instagram name megz_episode7997
How many episode you want me to review 4 are enough
Description A story about 16 celebrities who enter the house of Big Brother uder 24/7 surveillance for 2 months to win the prize of 500 000$, but before that they have to go through all challenges of Big Brother.
I would like you to promote my story.
Style LL
Cover IMG_20190223_164712
Link [http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4977128782561280 ](http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4977128782561280
This is my story I hope you are gonna like it.

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Thanks a lot for this, I’d love to hear what you think! :heart:
Title: Delinquent
Author: Josca Denise
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5263167807094784
Plot: You’re playing as the (male) lead singer of a world famous band. One day your bag gets stolen and you get sucked into the criminal circuit.
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Tribe of Malapinchi: @JannahJackson
Plot: I found this plot super captivating. There were lots of twists. I really don’t have anything to add because it was really good. It’s a really underrated story. You seem to have a lot of experience. 10/10

Characters: The characters were really well developed. I do wish that I could have met more Malapinchians. 9.5

Grammar: Excellent. Absolutely excellent. 10/10

Choices: I wish that the main (customizable character) could have had some more choices. Maybe put some on the tour? Like who to visit next. 9

Other things: I also love the educational things at the end of every chapter. Another thing is that I liked the length of the chapters. They worn’t to long but they also worn’t to short. I hate it when I spend a pass only for the episode to be 5 minutes long. This is a beautiful story. 38.5

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