Can I get some feedback on a story Im writing? **BONUS R4R**


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Hi It Lana Augustine :kissing_cat:
I’m revisiting some old stories on one of my old accounts. The one I’m working on today is one that is near and dear to my heart. I really would like so feedback on the story!
As a bonus I’ll read your story too only after I get proof that you really read the story. It can be an Ink, Limelight or Classic Story!



Summary:
After her little sister is taken as an act of revenge, Katori is now on a mission to get her back and take down a vampire drug lord. She is the slaughter and they are the lambs.

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4531242271899648


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@Sydney_H
Can you delete this please i made a new one!


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Topic closed by OP request. :wink: