hey! i’ve been having trouble with thispart of my script. i basically am making a choice inside of a choice. What’s happening is that the mc see’s her 2 friends from a year ago, and her new riends and she’s deciding who to go to. in the option to go over to saige, her new friends there is a choice inside of that choice. So, when i preview it looks like this:
who should i go over to?
I hould hang out with saige
But there should be another choice to hang out with amaya and layla, her old friends. If you could just rewrite this part of the script it would be rlly helpful!
heres my current script
NARRATOR
Who should you go over to?
(Going over to Saige and her Friends could possibly help you get more out there and get to your goal)
choice
“Go hang out with Saige”{
INT. BOOKSHELVES - DAY
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@ALIE walks to spot 0.673 185 180
@ALIE moves to layer 3
@LIAM spot 0.673 242 211
@LIAM moves to layer 0
@BRIAR spot 0.704 104 199
@BRIAR moves to layer 1
@SAIGE spot 0.623 206 231
@SAIGE moves to layer -1
@ETHAN spot 0.599 154 252
@ETHAN moves to layer 0
@BRIAR faces right
@ETHAN faces right
@LIAM walks to spot 0.673 260 178
@ALIE walks to spot 0.673 243 205 in zone 1
@ALIE moves to layer -1
@ETHAN is think_rubchin
ETHAN
(I wonder who that is...)
@SAIGE is talk_neutral_loop
SAIGE
OMG! Hey, [NAME]! I haven't seen you since summer!
NARRATOR
Try and make a good impression on them! Hint: Briar and Ethan like funny people with attitude!
choice
“No sh*t, Saige. It’s summer camp”{
ALIE
No sh*t, Saige. It's summer camp.
@ALIE is laugh_giggle
@ETHAN is laugh_crackup
@BRIAR is laugh_chuckle
@LIAM is laugh_chuckle
@SAIGE is eyeroll_sarcastic
@SAIGE is talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral
SAIGE
Okay, Okay. You don't have to slam me like that.
@ALIE is laugh_chuckle
ETHAN
That was brave, new girl. Usually if you mess with Saige like that she beats you up.
ALIE
Oh, I'm not-
SAIGE
How about we go to Moonscape Cafe? I'm thirsty.
ALIE
Saige, Your-
SAIGE
I know what your about to say, but dont say it!
LIAM
C'mon guys, let's just go.
@BRIAR exits left
@ETHAN exits left
@ALIE exits left
@LIAM exits left
@SAIGE exits left
}
NARRATOR
Try and make a good impression on them! Hint: Briar and Ethan like funny people with attitude!
"Yeah, I missed you."{
ALIE
Yeah, I missed you.
SAIGE
Yeah, same.
ETHAN
(This girl's kinda boring)
SAIGE
How about we go to Moonscape Cafe? I'm thirsty.
LIAM
C'mon guys, let's go.
@BRIAR exits left
@ETHAN exits left
@ALIE exits left
@LIAM exits left
@SAIGE exits left
}
“Hang out with Amaya and Layla” {
INT. BOOKSHELVES - DAY
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@ALIE walks to spot 0.673 185 180
@ALIE moves to layer 3
@AMAYA spot 0.673 242 211
@AMAYA moves to layer 0
@LAYLA spot 0.704 104 199
@LAYLA moves to layer 1
@AMAYA faces left
@LAYLA faces right
@LAYLA is talk_neutral_loop
@AMAYA is talk_neutral_loop
ALIE
Hey guys
AMAYA
...
LAYLA
...
}
NARRATOR
Looks like their ignoring you…
choice
“Repeat yourself”{
ALIE
Hello?
AMAYA
...
LAYLA
...
ALIE
(ugh, im gonna go find Saige)
@transition fade out black in 2
}
“Leave”{
ALIE
(ugh, im gonna go find Saige)
@transition fade out black in 2
}
ty!
