Directing and Spotting

I need a lot of help. I’ve edited my story so many times. No matter what I do my characters aren’t placed correctly and yes I’m using the directing and zoom helper. What am I doing wrong in my story? Help please!

what’s the problem exactly? and can we see your script? :slight_smile:

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My characters are never in place correctly even when using the spot tool and etc,
I’m posting the script below for one of the chapters but, it’s like that in the last two chapters. :frowning:

INT. MATURELANGUAGE

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR (JULIA)
Special thanks to @_Nasia for the mature language background and sound background.

@pause for a beat
sound airysynthriff

@pause for a beat

INT.SOUND

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR (JULIA)
TURN YOUR VOLUME UP!!!

music off

@pause for a beat

sound music_club_lp

INT. NIGHTCLUB BAR - NIGHT with BLEEDINGTEARS to .8 50 100 in zone 2

@pause for a beat

@zoom on 263 418 to 99% in 0
@ALISA spot 0.393 79 454
@ALISA moves to layer 0
@LEON spot 0.714 127 157
@LEON moves to layer 0
@TASHA spot 0.715 265 254
@TASHA moves to layer 0
@JOHNNY spot 0.784 37 137
@JOHNNY moves to layer 0
@ANNALISE spot 0.616 186 282
@ANNALISE moves to layer 0

@LEON stands screen left
@JOHNNY faces right

@ANNALISE is dance_drop_it
@ANNALISE is dance_jazzhands

@pause for a beat

@TASHA is dance_drop_it
@TASHA is dance_kpop

@pause for a beat

@TASHA is dance_robot

@ANNALISE is dance_disco_loop
@ANNALISE is dance_drop_it
@TASHA is dance_hands_up_loop

    NARRATOR (JULIA)
Some of us have had a little too much to drink.

@pause for a beat

@ANNALISE spot 0.616 171 265 and ANNALISE faces right
@AJ spot 0.680 213 236 and AJ faces right
@ANNALISE moves to layer 1
@AJ moves to layer 2
@ANNALISE starts kiss_passionate_loop
@AJ starts kiss_passionate_loop_rear

    TASHA (talk_repulsed)
She can get some action and I can't?
This is so messed up!
When did he get here?


    LEON (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
I'm about to lose it dude.

@JOHNNY stands screen left
@JOHNNY faces right
@LEON stands screen right
@LEON faces left

@TASHA spot 0.715 278 241
@JOHNNY spot 0.991 62 107
@LEON spot 0.997 269 99

@pause for a beat

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0

    JOHNNY (talk_sheepish)
What's going on?

@ANNALISE changes into Birthday Suit

    LEON (talk_angry_defensive)
That guy Annalise is making out with is my cousin's fiance.
That's the girl he's been cheating with for months.

    JOHNNY (talk_flex)
Oh shoot!
It's about to get ugly.

    JOHNNY (talk_call_out)
I'm down.
Let's do this.

@add Handgun to LEON
@add Handgun to JOHNNY

@zoom on ANNALISE to 200% in 2

#pause for 3 seconds

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0

#pause for 2 seconds

@zoom on ALISA to 300% in 2

    ALISA (talk_repulsed)
Oh hell no people.
This is a club.
Not a strip club.
Get a room!!!!!

@pause for a beat

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0

    LEON (talk_angry_stubborn)
The game starts now!
It's on.

@JOHNNY starts walk_rear
@JOHNNY is idle_rear
@LEON starts walk_rear
@LEON is idle_rear

music off

sound drone_scary

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@ALISA spot 0.393 270 0
@ALISA moves to layer 0
@LEON spot 1.087 44 -7
@LEON moves to layer 2
@ANNALISE spot 0.616 239 164
@ANNALISE moves to layer 1
@AJ spot 1.137 221 -27
@AJ moves to layer 2
@JOHNNY spot 1.027 35 22
@JOHNNY moves to layer 2
@TASHA spot 0.564 284 310
@TASHA moves to layer 0

@pause for a beat

    JOHNNY (talk_angry_defensive)
What do we have here?

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0

    AJ (talk_forward)
I'm having fun.
Get away from me!!!

@JOHNNY starts draw_gun
@ANNALISE spot 0.616 147 207

    JOHNNY (talk_angry_accuse)
I wouldn't move if I were you!!

    ANNALISE (startled_surprised)
WAIT!!! What's going on?

@LEON starts draw_gun

    LEON (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
You better get to explaining yourself now!!!!
GET TO TALKING AJ!!

    JOHNNY (talk_hold_gun)
One......
Two.............

@pause for a beat

INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@ALISA spot 0.393 270 0
@ALISA moves to layer 0
@LEON spot 1.280 29 -103
@LEON moves to layer 2
@ANNALISE spot 0.676 294 154
@ANNALISE moves to layer 1
@AJ spot 1.137 195 -142
@AJ moves to layer 2
@JOHNNY spot 1.280 6 -87
@JOHNNY moves to layer 2
@TASHA spot 0.564 276 294
@TASHA moves to layer 0

@pause for a beat

INT. NIGHTCLUB BAR - NIGHT

    TASHA (talk_hold_drink)
I'm going to need another drink after this.

@add Red Cup to TASHA
@TASHA starts drink

@pause for a beat

    JOHNNY (talk_hold_gun)
Thr...

    AJ (talk_afraid)
Let me explain.

@LEON is idle_rear
@JOHNNY is idle_rear

@pause for a beat

@LEON stands screen right
@AJ faces left
@ANNALISE faces left
@JOHNNY stands screen right

    LEON (talk_exclaim_yes)
The club is now closed.
Now we are going to play a game.
Each WRONG answer you'll get shot.

music off

sound music_doom2

@pause for a beat

    ALISA (idle_hold_microphone)
I'll make sure the doors are locked.

@pause for a beat

@ALISA starts run_athletic_offset

    JOHNNY (talk_angry)
Put your clothes back on!

@ANNALISE changes into ANNALISE_default

    AJ (talk_afraid)
I was drinking my life away.
Sante broke up with me and ended our engagement.
She called the wedding off.

    LEON (talk_happy_smile)
So this is the chick you've been cheating on my cousin with?
The late night texts and phone calls?

    LEON (talk_angry_stubborn)
ANSWER ME NOW!!!


    AJ (talk_sad)
YES!!She's the girl.


    LEON (talk_angry_defensive)
That's the wrong answer.
You shouldn't have cheated at all and then meet her at our local club.
That's one shot.
Johnny hit him where it hurts.

music off

@pause for a beat

sound gunshots3

music off

#pause for 3 seconds

@pause for a beat

@AJ is idle_kneel

@AJ is idle_wounded
@pause for a beat

@TASHA is dismayed

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@ALISA spot 0.393 270 0
@ALISA moves to layer 0
@LEON spot 1.280 29 -103
@LEON moves to layer 2
@ANNALISE spot 0.616 259 201
@ANNALISE moves to layer 1
@AJ spot 1.137 255 14
@AJ moves to layer 2
@JOHNNY spot 1.280 6 -87
@JOHNNY moves to layer 2
@TASHA spot 0.564 276 294
@TASHA moves to layer 0

@ANNALISE is walk_scared_offset

    ANNALISE (talk_angry_defensive)
I had no clue he was engaged.
He told me he wasn't seeing anyone.

@AJ is idle_kneel
@overlay BLEEDINGTEARS shifts to -73 90 in zone 3 in .2
@pause for .2
@overlay BLEEDINGTEARS shifts to -50 90 in zone 3 in .2

    TASHA (think)
I have to get out of here and never look back.

My second chapter you can’t see my character when the words are on the screen. :frowning:
I wish i knew someone who could code this for me.
I’ve used the spot placement many times.

You either need to reset zoom on the very beginning or just enter and exit the story.

There’s a glitch that makes characters disappear if you exit the app instead of exiting the story first

Thank you so much.