So, I just finished writing, but I’m nowhere near done with my first episode. I would like someone ; though, to review what I have to see if I have to fix anything before I keep going.
Plot: it is about a world where love is considered a disease
That’s all you need as I only have ab 300 lines but I wanna make sure they’re good
Here’s the link, and thanks for your time
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