I’m sorry,but anyone review what I have in my story?

So, I just finished writing, but I’m nowhere near done with my first episode. I would like someone ; though, to review what I have to see if I have to fix anything before I keep going.

Plot: it is about a world where love is considered a disease
That’s all you need as I only have ab 300 lines but I wanna make sure they’re good

Here’s the link, and thanks for your time
I love The Dead Man Disease! Check it out! http://bit.ly/EpisodeHere #episode

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Would you like to have a review by me?

oh wow i didn’t know you’d be publishing it so soon
tell me when it’s done i’d love to read the finished first episodes!

I’ll read your story too :slight_smile:

Hi @StoryWriter10 ! I am a reviewer and I love to review stories from new authors! I’m really excited to read yours, I’ll add it to my list!

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