Perfect thank you so much!
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Thank you for doing this, it’s so nice of you!
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Greetings! I’d love to hear your thoughts on my latest story. 
Title: Magicka: Dark Star
Author: Silver Lady
Style: LL
Status: Finished (3 episode short story)
Description: Lyal was born under a dark star, an omen of evil and death . Will she rage against the dying of her light? Or will she embrace her dark destiny? (choices matter, 4 endings).
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5969712374808576
Cover:
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Moved to Share Feedback since this is for story reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. 
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Hi can you review my story? There are only 2 Episodes so far.
Title: Who’s Who?
Author: Tay11
Genre: Drama
#of episodes: 2 (so far)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5915374336671744
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Diamond’s Keeper (review):
Hi! Okay so your cover art is so pretty! 
One thing I noticed is in one of the first scenes when Sapphire is on the throne with ruby next to him and his two guards in front, they sort of pop up on the screen instead of standing there already. One way you can fix it is by putting the & symbol in front of everyones names instead of @
So your script would look like this:
INT. CRYSTAL THRONE ROOM CROP-NIGHT
&Sapphire spot X Y Z
&RUBY spot X Y Z
&BRAD spot X Y Z
&RAD spot X Y Z
This will help everyone be on the screen when the scene opens instead of them popping up
Now onto your story: it is so cool! I love the fantasy genre and I love how there is a different planet that the main character is going to discover. All of your characters are super pretty and I love the use of all your overlays and unique backgrounds. Also, another thing that I liked about your story is that you had a lot of choices. I really liked it and I hope it becomes super popular 
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Thank you so much for this review, I really appreciate the advice, I am going to fix it right away.
Thank you 
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Title: Dance Party
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Drama
# of episodes: 3
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5516066628632576
60 Minutes Ahead (review):
Hi! Ok the part where Sam was like “Shut up Karen” and “Your hair says otherwise” omg so funny I was cracking up! I love that even though your story has a serious theme, you still incorporate humor into it
In the scene where we are introduced to Bella, she says something along the lines of “Boss practically eats from my pawn”. I don’t think pawn is the correct word. Were you thinking palm? Like the palm of the hand?? Also when Sam tells the story while at the bar it says “if all started junior year of high school” which i think you meant to say “it all started…” instead of if.
Other than those few things, I think your story is good. Its really funny!
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you found it funny 
Also thanks for pointing those few mistakes out I actually meant to write paw, and It (but since it didn’t correct me I never noticed those mistakes I made)
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Ahhhh I loved this one so much!!! Okay so one thing that I really liked about your story is that it keeps moving and it makes sense. A lot of the time, I find that new writers have tons of dialogue that gets boring or doesn’t move the story along. This story makes so much sense and it’s not boring at all!! I love all the unique background and overlays. But most of all you are a fabulous writer! I don’t have any more passes left but I added this one to my favorites and absolutely look forward to reading more 
amazing job!
It’s okay
Aww this absolutely made my day! Thank you for your kind and supportive words! I put so much effort into making the storyline flow and keep the reader engaged and I am so glad it payed off
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** Deadly Game (review):**
I loved your story!!! Your writing skills are amazing and I love your character development. I’m currently out of passes so I only got to read the first chapter but I’m definitely intrigued and can’t wait to read more. You did a great job, I don’t have any constructive criticism
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I’d love a review 
Story : Life of a problematic teenager
Author: Gia
Episodes: 6
Genre: Drama
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5360519776632832
Cover:
Thank you so much for the review!
I will definitely consider the first choice, but the reason I made it so short is so that the readers will get to see the avial view of the parking lot xD unfortunately I can’t add cc due to the same reason you mentioned! 
Again, thank you for taking your time to do this
Thank you! I’m glad you liked the story 
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Hello! Thank you so much for doing this!
Title: Two Paths
Author: Passion
Genre: Drama
Short Description: When Elena, an aspiring doctor, meets Lucas, a gangster with a rough past, it’s clear they’re opposites. However, they share the same goal that no one can know about… (CC)
Episodes: There are 3 chapters
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6662214484033536
Cover:
Hey! 
I’d love a review 
Title: Till Eternity
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight.
Episodes 3
Description: Emersyn’s life completely changes when she turns 18. Now, she must leave Earth, embrace her destiny and rule the Underworld by marrying one of the four Princes.
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Title: Magicka: Rain
Author: Avarose456
Genre: Fantasy/Action
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5702444050087936
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