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Hi! Is this still open?

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Yes, it’s still open! :heart:

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Great!!

Title: In apnoea
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It is a story that depicts the struggles teenagers go through (I would recommend reading if you’re over 15) from multiple points of views. This way, every character can feel represented in the story and identify in a character (example of topic touched: abandonment, drug addiction, bodyshaming)

I would love it if you reviewed it because I put a lot of effort into it and I want to improve the story the more I can!

Thanks if you choose it :blue_heart: :blue_heart:

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