I’m kinda tight for time (I feel so flaky -_- , I’m so sorry) but I’ll hopefully get to your story by tomorrow but I’m currently in the process of reading your story.
I find it really cool that you’ve got a sports-based story, I’ve not read many sport revolving episode stories (and let us stan a female football player)
Let’s do R4R! Title: Scarlet Rose Author name: Charlotte Description: For 16 years, you are locked away from the world to hide your powers. What happens when you escape? Not every fairytale has a happy ending - will yours? (CC, choices matter, games)
Cover: Here’s the old cover (and the soon to be one)
I really like the premise of this story as it was something I cared about quite a lot as I was growing up since I played soccer (Brits call it football haha) & really believed in including females in sports. Love how thought out the story line was as well - I can tell it took a lot of love and time. One tip would be maybe check grammar by using Grammarly as well as some popping characters in the first episode (maybe do a &command instead of an @ command) to get rid of that issue
Description: For over a decade, Amy lived under her father’s tyranny as the “Princess”. Now, brought back to Earth, will she discover an unknown power deep within her?
CC | Choices | 2Li
Awe thank you so much
I’m in love with your story too you put a lot of work into it. The dialogue is amazing and directing and the t.v, phone scenes were all beautiful
You took alot of time to write your story as well, I love how you represent the characters is the MC Indian?
Sorry for the long wait - I’ve read up to 3 chapters
Here are the screenshots and my thoughts are that it is like a cool take on Rapunzel (the locked in the tower bit anyway) and the directing is top notch as hell - like wow, the use of overlays and interactive tappable overlays. Also, a very interesting fantasy story - I don’t really read fantasy often but I love when a world is believable which is what you achieved
R4R? Title- The Baddest Szn 1 Author- JLIT Description- Be Apart of “The Baddest” a click in Highschool as you follow Jordan’s life in her leader status Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5802639068692480
Feedback ?- Yes, through PM
I’m not going to do read for reads at the moment on the thread as I’m pretty overwhelmed so please don’t start on my story since it won’t be fair. I’ll hopefully check both of your stories out when I get the time with no strings attached.