If the description is really cliché or poorly written, I will not even open the story.
Poor directing.
Poor grammar, especially no full stops on the end of sentences. Like, c’mon… full stops are one of the basics of most languages.
Unnecessarily long author introductions.
Characters that just don’t look right, like really odd colors and features that don’t seem to mix and match well, especially if it’s NOT a sci-fi story.
Height differences. I will leave if every or most male characters are seemingly so much taller than all of the female characters, it’s just weird and unrealistic.
If the bubble placements are bad on a regular basis.
If MC likes to slap people, especially if it’s just for “for fun.” If she slaps someone for assaulting her, that’s different, but I hate MCs who thinks it’s okay to physically hurt people because she thinks it’s cool or whatever.
If all of the characters have similar features because it looks like the author favors specific features and cannot venture outside of them. Also unrealistic for everyone to look the same.
Really short chapters.
If I feel the story has been dragged out for too long and should’ve ended quite awhile ago.
If it’s classic - I exit immediately…
A super duper toxic love interest, unless I have other options or it’s a thriller.
If the story focuses too much on the author rather than the characters.
If the characters never seem to change their clothes. I saw a story once where the characters were still wearing the same clothes at the end when they got married as they did when they met… without changing outfits through the story.
Inaccuracy. If a place, culture, religion or people are portrayed inaccurately to a severe degree and it shows that the author doesn’t know what they’re talking about - in most cases, I’ll leave. Sometimes, I’ll stay if it’s brief.
If the humor is so consistently cringe that I have to turn away.
If CC pops up for almost every character that I meet.
Really fast pace.
Really slow pace, unless it’s a slowburn story.
If the story seems to be similar to an unpublished story of mine, particularly if it’s a dramedy or romcom - I will normally not read it because I don’t want to be accused of copying.
If I feel like the story focuses too much on advanced directing rather than the plot and character development.
Too many choices, especially choices of no importance to the plot.
What KEEPS me reading:
Decent directing at the very least.
Great pacing.
Good bubble placements.
Good grammar.
Diverse characters and backstories.
Compelling storyline.
A story doesn’t need nice aesthetics to keep me, but it’s a bonus.