Overall, the concept of the story is pretty interesting and I loved the interpretation of vampirism
Great use of overlays at the beginning (loved the intro!)
With the dressing game, I am assuming you’d used a template (me too honey!), I’d recommend you adjust the coding to tailor your needs. So MC is a little lady, to maintain her size, you can make her walk off in the same spot but in a different zone and after her outfit change she goes back to her original spot.
I noticed you are rewriting the story so if all these directing tips/comments I have made do not apply to you, feel free to ignore them!
However, despite the little errors, the story is pretty cool from what I have seen!
Haha, loved the dream Ava had! Brilliant with some awesome puns!
Episode Two:
Oop, I noticed a layering issue when Madison wakes up Ava, to fix this I’d recommend @MADISON moves to layer 6 AND AVA moves to layer -6
Lol, I love the humour in this story - it’s a bit crazy, and I love that!
Ha, Ava is a little smartass!
Great spot directing and advanced directing, the plot pace is pretty good as well.
Overall Comments:
Great humour, nice music choices, interesting plot with a sarky protagonist. Great job!
Ya still thinking about it while I’m working on a new project lol I’m hoping to get my comedy episode out real soon so all my attention is going to The Adventures of Bathwoman… lol
Tittle: Search for love.
Author Name: Sigma.fr
Intagram: Sigma.fr.writes
Story Description :Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation! Can you find the love you are looking for trying to escape?
Genre: Drama
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548786201264128
3 episodes are out, pls check them out and let me know if you like them.
Follow Bathwoman on her adventure to save her city from Dr. Dirt, will Bathwoman and her new friends win or will they get dirty. (INK)
Clever use of sound effects as well showing the reader what is happening rather than telling them!
Sheesh, Anne is not having the best of days!
Very engaging and the dialogue is sufficient enough to not require description.
Fantastic cliffhanger and loved the cover, but now I am wondering who on Earth was her killer…
Episode Two:
Hmm, it seems her day is repeating so could be her days will be repeated until she finds out who her killer is? (This reminds me of one of my favourite books!!)
Brilliant directing skills - very good indeed.
However, I am wondering why her day is being repeated.
Darn, eyepatch dude looks sketchy and Anne seems to know Josh from somewhere…
Despite her day repeating, there are different parts that were not there before!!
Overall Comments:
What a fascinating plot! Love the psychological thriller vibes I am getting from this and the pacing of the story is very nicely done! Fantastic!
