Moved to Share Feedback since this is about your story. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions.
Don’t judge the episode based on how many lines you have coded, but rather how many minutes it takes for you to play and read through everything.
You are never going to please everyone, so while listening to all feedback is great, just remember that it is your story. You aren’t only writing for others: this is also yours to enjoy.
I have seen many people doing Q/A for their stories and I thought It will be more easy if we do it together. You can ask any questions for your story (as poll) here and we all will vote!
This way it will be easy to see many peoples opinion.