Magicka : what is your story about?

[writerren]

Thank you!

[Auremiol]

My Magicka story is called Nathaniel. It’s not yet published… I’m only a half way trough first episode, because I have been writing 9th chapter to My Superlife… But it is now nearly done, so soon I can continue writing Nathaniel…

Description: Nathaniel is the master of dark magic. He and his twin sister are criminals and assassins. They are both very powerful and they care only about each other, and their small crew. They live in a world where magic powers aren’t very common thing to posses, so they have to hide their powers. They also hide their true identity from their business partners. Nathaniel doesn’t believe in love or in relationships. Until one “just an ordinary gig” changes it all… (Male MC, CC, CM, 1 LI)

maybe a bit cliche… and I’m still trying to change description better…
oh… And here is the story cover:

[ColeCatalyst]

@line123462

Going home from work I find an unconscious man, waiting for the ambulance I don’t see a magic creature sneaking into my bag, now I need to hide from the fairies hunting me. full cc

Hey, you could try something like this for the description:
When you stop to help an unconscious man, a mystical creature hides in your bag. Now, you must defeat* the fairies hunting you! Will you survive? * *Full CC * *

[lanafrazer_episode]

Yeah, it sounds more better, and it’s short because in the description box, we have less space to add more in description.

[ColeCatalyst]

I know. It’s hard to describe a book or story in 500 letters or less. I think they should increase the # of letters allowed in descriptions. While I’m not entering the contest, I look forward to reading those who do. I am a sucker for magic lol

[Spiegel.TheMirror]

@Dominique_Seth_Da_Si

Name: Magicka: Hidden world
Author: Dominique Seth Da Silva
Genre: fantasy
Choices: matter
Description: life as an orphan seems fair, until a strange Scotsman tells Zelena that her parents need her to come back to her real home in Woodbridge. Although she is confused and unwilling to accompany him, she is taken back to Woodbridge: an entire magical kingdom hidden within the Knysna forest. And within Woodbridge awaits an entire hidden world of magic, warriors and creatures. One question remains: why does Zelena remember nothing about this world?

Well, this sounds fantastic ˆˆˆˆˆˆˆˆˆˆˆˆˆˆ

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I’m hoping to enter this time (my first contest!)

Name: Magicka: Clubhouse of the Cursed
Author: Spiegel
Genre: Fantasy
Choices: Choices matter & 3 point systems
Description: When your Fairy Godmother mysteriously dies, you’re stuck with a fairy apprentice and an unlikely bunch of Hexlings. Can you work together to break all of your curses?

[lanafrazer_episode]

This sounds so interesting!

[line123462]

but she dosent fight the fairys she hides from them.

[TL_DR]

Name: Magicka: Heavenly Sins
Author: TL_DR
Genre: Fantasy
Choices: No choices (movie-style story)
Description: A flood of supernatural creatures into New Orleans attracts Jacob White, a half-angel monster hunter. With the help of a teenage psychic and a super genius, can he find what lurks in the shadows?
Cover: I requested it this morning, should have it soon! ^^

Everyone’s stories sound so cool I-

[ColeCatalyst]

changed:
When you stop to help an unconscious man, a mystical creature hides in your bag. Now, you must hide from the fairies hunting you! Will you survive? * *Full CC * *

I was just trying to throw out a way to shorten your description. I know that they limit the # of letters allowed in a description.

[ColeCatalyst]

A few people would complain that there aren’t choices, but I think this sounds like something I’d forgo choices to read. It sounds interesting!

[TL_DR]

Yeah, I’m worried about that too. I want to focus on the directing and I’m worried that if I do advanced branching too I won’t be able to finish in time. Thank you!

[line123462]

I am one of those people who has a problem with no choice stories. because those are what I read episode stories for

[ColeCatalyst]

Let’s not derail the thread.I like choices, but I was just pointing out that @TL_DR 's story sounds interesting enough that I would forgo the choices to see what happens in it. and so yours sounds interesting as well. Most fantasy stories want the MC to fight back, I think it’d be cool to try an MC who doesn’t…

[lanafrazer_episode]

@TL_DR

No choices (movie-style story)

I WOULD LOVE TO READ A STORY WITH NO CHOCIES AT ALL, just a movie tbh, I don’t really care if people hate it or not, or don’t want to read it, I will still read regardless.

[line123462]

I know you are trying to help. I just cant take the will she survive. I feel like that is a very stupid qustions. like shes the mc ofcourse she will.

its like those stupid qustions there sometimes are asked in the end of a chapter. I hate them so much. I read the chapter I know this why are you pointing it out.

[ColeCatalyst]

Okay

[lanafrazer_episode]

@TL_DR

I’m worried that if I do advanced branching too I won’t be able to finish in time

It’s okay, work with what you’re comfortable with.

[ColeCatalyst]

@Spiegel.TheMirror

Name: Magicka: Clubhouse of the Cursed

This is something I could get into!

[meghanwrites]

Magical: forbidden curse

Cc: no, other than hairstyle because the mc is a dark skinned Maori and we don’t want her changed.
Description : A political fantasy about a witch in her quest to defeat the rulers and bring magic back again.

Choices matter- your ending will depend on how many allies and enemies you make.

Possible sub of comedy, very little if not no romance.